The Terrible Keyboard War
It wasn't classy, but casey.17 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha you made me laugh and the last line is to die for:) "He was a LAWYER ... well, KINDA. Some said he was a member of the bar; in ANY CASE, he came up with a peaceful resolution.
"What you guys need", he said, " is some space."
And then he pushed for it, know what I mean?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Ha, ha, ha you made me laugh and the last line is to die for:) "He was a LAWYER ... well, KINDA. Some said he was a member of the bar; in ANY CASE, he came up with a peaceful resolution.
"What you guys need", he said, " is some space."
And then he pushed for it, know what I mean?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much! It's always rewarding to have laugh when one is TRYING to be funny! I've had my share of misfires, so am lapping up any hint of the reaction I was looking for in the first place. Thanks again and I congratulate you on your excellent taste in humor. :) Dennis
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I think I would like to look inside your head. It must be busy in there. This was hysterical. What an interesting concept. I haven't seen you before. I look forward to more writing from you. Keep up the good work. Karen
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I think I would like to look inside your head. It must be busy in there. This was hysterical. What an interesting concept. I haven't seen you before. I look forward to more writing from you. Keep up the good work. Karen
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I assure you there is plenty of space to accommodate your investigation of my head. It won't take long and will probably be rather disappointing. My father's metaphorical description of my boyhood achievements/failures: "You're like a cow that gives a good pail of milk and then kicks it over." So be warned, but also welcomed. Thanks again for your kind words, Dennis
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You are welcome. I enjoyed it. I write all kinds of things. I am learning all about poetry here. You are never to old to learn.:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious, inventive, entertaining and a joy to read, I loved the humour here Den and you made me laugh at every word here, I wish I had a six left for you, this is a great post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is hilarious, inventive, entertaining and a joy to read, I loved the humour here Den and you made me laugh at every word here, I wish I had a six left for you, this is a great post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Any number from you is valued as a six in my book! Glad you liked it, Dolly.
Dennis
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Bless you Den x
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Great fun! A clever, original idea in this story of keyboard war. Excellent dialogue:)) And a humorous play on words with the lawyer being a member of the bar. I have to say, sometimes. I really think the keys are more in charge of me than me of them! So very relatable. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Great fun! A clever, original idea in this story of keyboard war. Excellent dialogue:)) And a humorous play on words with the lawyer being a member of the bar. I have to say, sometimes. I really think the keys are more in charge of me than me of them! So very relatable. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind words, Debbie. So glad you enjoyed it! Dennis
Comment from tfawcus
This is a most inventive and entertaining piece of writing, Deniz. I was all spaced out trying to remember which squiggles went above each of the numeric keys. You had some clever descriptors there.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is a most inventive and entertaining piece of writing, Deniz. I was all spaced out trying to remember which squiggles went above each of the numeric keys. You had some clever descriptors there.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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And I like your clever review! Thank you so much, my friend, Dennis
Comment from Mintybee
This was humourous. I loved the word play. You personified the keyboard components really well. One small complaint: caps lock does not effect the numbers. The shift key effects the numbers, but caps lock only applies to the QWERTY part of the keyboard. I almost docked you a star for it, but I knew what you meant, and you wrote very well, and it's a bit of a nitpicky complaint.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This was humourous. I loved the word play. You personified the keyboard components really well. One small complaint: caps lock does not effect the numbers. The shift key effects the numbers, but caps lock only applies to the QWERTY part of the keyboard. I almost docked you a star for it, but I knew what you meant, and you wrote very well, and it's a bit of a nitpicky complaint.
Mintybee
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Mintybee, for clarifying the function of the shift key and the numbers on the keyboard, while out of compassion leaving the star. I do so struggle with being right and not being nitpicky about it. :) Thank you, Dennis
Comment from Navada
This is so creative and funny!! I really like the "characters" you've created here and their funny interplay is absolutely choice. Thanks so much for sharing this! :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is so creative and funny!! I really like the "characters" you've created here and their funny interplay is absolutely choice. Thanks so much for sharing this! :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. It's always satisfying to be considered funny when trying to be so. I have experienced unintentionally provoked laughter, and your type of response is decidedly preferable. Dennis
Comment from Ric Myworld
My busy schedule, like most everyone else, doesn't allow me to read everyone I'd like to regularly. But today I'm glad I found a little time to read your post. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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My busy schedule, like most everyone else, doesn't allow me to read everyone I'd like to regularly. But today I'm glad I found a little time to read your post. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you, very kind of you, Dennis
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is especially entertaining with the play on words: ""What makes you think so ?" questioned the ? mark." This one is clever: "I always feel up when the caps does his thing", said the 6." I like your use of personification. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is especially entertaining with the play on words: ""What makes you think so ?" questioned the ? mark." This one is clever: "I always feel up when the caps does his thing", said the 6." I like your use of personification. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. So glad you found my writing entertaining as I had fun writing this piece. Dennis
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It was excellent, genius.
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At LAST! Someone who recognizes me for who I really am! :) NOT!
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****Guffaw****
Comment from T B Botts
HELLO dENNIS,
i'M GLAD TO SEE YOU'RE BACK! tHIS WAS PRETTY ORIGINAL. i'M STILL USING THE KEY BOARD THAT CAME WITH THE COMPUTER SO MANY YEARS AGO. wE NEED A NEW ONE, AS THE LETTERS ARE STARTING TO WEAR OFF, AND i CAN'T RECALL WHERE CERTAIN LETTERS ARE AT TIMES. tHANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING MY FRIEND.
hAVE A BLESSED EVENING.
tOM
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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HELLO dENNIS,
i'M GLAD TO SEE YOU'RE BACK! tHIS WAS PRETTY ORIGINAL. i'M STILL USING THE KEY BOARD THAT CAME WITH THE COMPUTER SO MANY YEARS AGO. wE NEED A NEW ONE, AS THE LETTERS ARE STARTING TO WEAR OFF, AND i CAN'T RECALL WHERE CERTAIN LETTERS ARE AT TIMES. tHANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING MY FRIEND.
hAVE A BLESSED EVENING.
tOM
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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HI TOM, IT LOOKS LIKE THE CAPS LOCK MUST BE COMPLETELY OBLIBERATED OR YOU MAY JUST HAVE WANTED TO GIVE ME A SHOUT OUT?
IN ANY CASE (ANY CASE, GET IT?) THANKS BUDDY, DENNIS