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Songs of Recovery

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Tending Wounds"
A collection of poems around healing.

5 total reviews 
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Very heartfelt post. As I read it, I could feel your strong commitment to bring comfort and hope to those in your care.
Inspiring and thoughtful.
RJ

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your time and feedback. I?m glad it came across well. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your time and feedback. I?m glad it came across well. Have a great day.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Hello, K!

This is a perfect example of writing what you know. There is a hidden beauty to the way this piece is presented. The passion and the precise word choices make this engaging and bring your piece, for me, full circle.

Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words and that you took the time. Thank you, and I hope you have a wonderful week.
Comment from Wendyanne
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Wow what an extremely powerful, well written piece of free verse poetry in which you have described looking after someone who is self harming so vividly descriptively. As a former mental health nurse I can relate to yuor words. Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for the kind words and the work you did yourself in mental health. It?s not an easy thing, to put things mildly. I appreciate you giving the poem your time.
Comment from Navada
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What a stark and striking piece. This must be such a difficult job but one that is of such great value for the people who need this kind of support. Thanks for the share.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate the look and your time.
Comment from Erin sauce
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I like this poem overall but there's just not something rite about it.i don't know if its bc of the way I may be reading this are what it is bc yes I do like it but it's just not hitting home with me.i think that maybe u should go over it a few times as I do with mine and do be afraid to make changes.you never know that change that wasn't made could be all u may have needed to get to that next level.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you for reviewing the poem, but could you be more specific about what was wrong with it? I?m open to corrections, but I?d find something specific far easier to address.