Snowman
Kids having fun in the snow.2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
What begins as a snowball fight ends in the fun of building a snowman. You make us see every stage, from finding items to "dress" him to those poignant moments when he starts to melt. Kids will enjoy reading this poem. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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What begins as a snowball fight ends in the fun of building a snowman. You make us see every stage, from finding items to "dress" him to those poignant moments when he starts to melt. Kids will enjoy reading this poem. Rod
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the read and for the review. Now that I'm old, I hope there is not too much of the white stuff. My back isn't as supple as it used to be. No more snowball fights or fort building. Oh, well at least the kids down the block have fun in the snow.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very sweet poem. It brings back pleasant childhood memories, and is something that most children can relate to. It has a pleasant bouncy rhythm and well-chosen simple rhymes that children should appreciate. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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This is a very sweet poem. It brings back pleasant childhood memories, and is something that most children can relate to. It has a pleasant bouncy rhythm and well-chosen simple rhymes that children should appreciate. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Remember, when the white stuff falls to have fun.
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I was never one for snowball fights, but I'll never outgrow building snowmen, then coming in for hot chocolate to warm up!
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Hot chocolate with extra marshmallows
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Sold!!!