Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Elaine,


Congrats on your first place win in the Trinet Contest. Your short verse is an excellent example of this poetic form. You have mastered the requirements of the format and brilliantly captured the essence of a Guardian angel in your well-written lines.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You managed to give this poem a powerful message within your rhyming words and it is a joy to read, I wish you luck with the contest, a fine presentation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024

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Comment from Navada

Excellent

The artwork here is stunning and helps to lend an additional air of mystery to the poem. I like the central theme here of a guardian angel being entreated for protection.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I like your poem. Thank you so much for your intriguing words. Guardian angels appear when we least expect them. They can be earthly, and still walking on this earth.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024

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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Wowsers! That is one fantastical picture. Perfect for your poem.

I know that if I was a cat I would already be dead. I have had way more than nine close calls in my line of work. I have to believe that I was protected by something, so does God send angels to protect us? I have to believe so. Great work!
D

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a dramatic post with eye-catching visual and a lovely trinet to do it justice! Your verse flows beautifully and effortlessly with unforced rhyme and a message of love and protection under the wings of an angel. Well done and a strong contender in the contest! Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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Comment from Yusita

Excellent

Jesus is the link between us and Heaven, but angels are God's special messengers. I've always been fascinated by them. I can't wait to meet my Guardian Angel. Thanks for sharing this lovely write.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

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Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

Beautiful picture. Love the colors. Picture goes well the poem. I like how you used envelope me at thr bottom of the poem i also like "hear my whisper. 8thVery well written.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

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