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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow that was a really nice poem! I especially enjoy your last stands up very well done! Third stanza third line down one small typo. This does not take away from the Beauty and talent of your poem and I was a pleasure to read! Welcome to Fanstory! This is a great first entry and a fine submission I wish you best of luck and look forward to reading more of your work have a wonderful evening!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Wow that was a really nice poem! I especially enjoy your last stands up very well done! Third stanza third line down one small typo. This does not take away from the Beauty and talent of your poem and I was a pleasure to read! Welcome to Fanstory! This is a great first entry and a fine submission I wish you best of luck and look forward to reading more of your work have a wonderful evening!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Sabrina H.
Welcome to FanStory and congratulations on your first post.
I like your poem. It is well written and I like the flow and rhythm. Great first post and look forward to reading more of your writing.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Welcome to FanStory and congratulations on your first post.
I like your poem. It is well written and I like the flow and rhythm. Great first post and look forward to reading more of your writing.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much it means a great deal !!!
