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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Iza,
This is a good free verse poem that shows the power of faith and prayer.
Both do more than you think they do.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written for, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. Many of the writers on the side have been an inspiration to me with my own writing as well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

Comment from Dawn Munro
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Amen! This is the kind of poetry I enjoy the most -- we have enough troubles in this world. This kind of uplifting verse inspires others, and can often stop a gloomy attitude in its tracks, IMHO.

Wonderful!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, as a FanStory praying community we can help in so many ways. Thank you for this wonderful reminder of how powerful we can be as a praying community.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from estory
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Amen. Loved this one. Rock solid structure underscores a rock solid thesis here, and I like how you illustrate the prayer through these images of moving mountains and building bridges and how the sorrows melt into happy tears. estory

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from BethShelby
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It is good that FanStory has a group of people who care deeply of all of us who have come to consider this our family. You are are right that prayer can change things an make a diffeence by bring hope and healing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from BethShelby
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It is good that FanStory has a group of people who care deeply of all of us who have come to consider this our family. You are are right that prayer can change things an make a diffeence by bring hope and healing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from royowen
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There's nothing like corporate prayer, there is a power that operates in unified agreement on earth that works miracles in the heavenlies and manifesting on the earth. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This prayer, Passing the Torch, reminds the readers that prayer is the greatest weapon we may have when none other exist or can work against what time and fate bring.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from Navada
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I like the message here of redemption that is available to everyone through God's love and the gift of Jesus Christ his Son. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024