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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is just delightful. The imagery and creativity are brilliant.
With snow and ice on the ground, this is warming and refreshing.
I enjoyed discovering this haiku.
Mary

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love the idea of a ladybug under the daisy umbrella. What a wonderful image you've painted with words. Thank you for sharing this cute and fun poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Barbara.

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Nice overall presentation for your ladybug! It is a good addition to your 2024 Haiku book.

Good use of your artwork and text coloring scheme for this post.

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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I like this sweet verse and especially the wonderful artwork you chose to set the scene and tone. Well done in crafting a lovely, whimsical write. I enjoyed it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Melissa.

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Comment from shelley kaye
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you had me with the ladybug - love them!

a great haiku - never thought of a daisy being an umbrella before
interesting and thought-provoking imagery

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Again we seem to be on the same wavelength. I just posted my picture of dewdrops on the cat grass I grew. I like the ladybugs under "daisy umbrellas." I don't know why ladybugs are the preferred bug but I'm glad that they eat aphids!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,
    Marival
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is beautiful and... Now I wish there wasn't 6 inches of snow outside! This made me nostalgic for a fresh spring morning.
Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Julie.

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Comment from Navada
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Daisy umbrellas! How delightful! This looks and sounds Disneyesque in all the best possible ways - it made me think of the movie Fantasia. Thank you so much for the share! :)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Nevada. Disneyesque is a wonderful comparison, I love Disneyland. 😀

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a cute ladybug Haku. He sat next to dewdrops and was like a big and colorful one. The slimily of daisy as an umbrella is nice and creative.

Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Rosemary. Disneyesque is a wonderful comparison, I love Disneyland. 😀

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reply by Jasmine Girl on 07-Jan-2024
    I'm not Rosemary :).
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Sorry, I hate when that happens. I reviewed Rosemary before you and had her name on my mind.
reply by Jasmine Girl on 07-Jan-2024
    No problem.