An Ode To An Ode
A great writing form.6 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
My goodness, this flowed like a monorhyming river, my talented friend. A lovely poetic offering for the ode contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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My goodness, this flowed like a monorhyming river, my talented friend. A lovely poetic offering for the ode contest. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This was a fun project but it didn?t do well here. Very fun!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Goodness, how did you do this with that monorhyme! I'm impressed (though grammar not always spot-on), it's quite a fun feat and extravaganza of rhyming skill, all as a tribute to that rather common-sounding 'ode'! Quite a tribute! Good luck Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Goodness, how did you do this with that monorhyme! I'm impressed (though grammar not always spot-on), it's quite a fun feat and extravaganza of rhyming skill, all as a tribute to that rather common-sounding 'ode'! Quite a tribute! Good luck Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Yeah I had to take a few liberties with grammar to make it work. Even I spotted that! Ha!
Thank you my friend. It didnt do great but they can?t all be winners. Still, this was so much fun!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Writing an ode is praising someone who you admire. We need a pat on the back when writing an ode sometimes (even if we praise ourselves for writing the ode.) I bet you got lots of clapping when you took your curtsy.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Writing an ode is praising someone who you admire. We need a pat on the back when writing an ode sometimes (even if we praise ourselves for writing the ode.) I bet you got lots of clapping when you took your curtsy.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Ha! The crowd exploded. It was an amazing feeling. Quite the adrenaline rush. Couldn?t believe it.
Comment from jessizero
I loved your rhymes and the way your poem flowed! An "ode to an ode" was a very clever idea. I am glad you are doing well in the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I loved your rhymes and the way your poem flowed! An "ode to an ode" was a very clever idea. I am glad you are doing well in the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thanks although I think I am in last place. Ha! Your praise is win enough for me, Jessi!
Comment from Julie Helms
You had me laughing just at the title! This is very witty and funny.
"So stick with the ode regaling a great load."
This got me going to... Odes and poetry are oft delicate and spiritual and you're talking about great loads :-D
Thank you for the laugh! Julie.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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You had me laughing just at the title! This is very witty and funny.
"So stick with the ode regaling a great load."
This got me going to... Odes and poetry are oft delicate and spiritual and you're talking about great loads :-D
Thank you for the laugh! Julie.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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So I won already because I made you laugh. That is, after all, what writing is all about!
Comment from Navada
Well, this is a rhyming tour de force! There is a real liveliness and verve to this piece and it is a fun exploration of the art of writing. One suggestion I'd make is to alter your line lengths so the rhyming is more visually apparent. Good luck for the contest! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Well, this is a rhyming tour de force! There is a real liveliness and verve to this piece and it is a fun exploration of the art of writing. One suggestion I'd make is to alter your line lengths so the rhyming is more visually apparent. Good luck for the contest! :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thanks, my Aussie pal! I had sixty seconds on open mike to read this. Hence the rapid format!
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Understood!