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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Two line contest entry with us. Yes, the sun is beautiful at sunrise, throughout the day, and at sunset. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this Two line contest entry with us. Yes, the sun is beautiful at sunrise, throughout the day, and at sunset. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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thank you barbara! may i ask about the four? and if you have any suggestions for making it better? was it missing something? 🤔✌️💙🖋️🦄
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If course you may asked why the four. It's simple, I screwed up. I'll fix it. Soooo sorry. I'm glad you asked.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words as well. Very lovely overall presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words as well. Very lovely overall presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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thank you joanne 🤗😊💓🖊️🦄
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Your welcome Shelly 🙂
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Michelle,
Life surely does go by from sunrise to sunset everyday. Or form youth to old age, if this is metaphoric.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Hi Michelle,
Life surely does go by from sunrise to sunset everyday. Or form youth to old age, if this is metaphoric.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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lol thank you joan 😎💙🖊️🦄
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You are most kindly welcome, Michelle.
Joan
Comment from Cedar
Hello Shelley,
This is another great entry. I really like the colorful pictures that you have chosen, they bring your words to life.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Hello Shelley,
This is another great entry. I really like the colorful pictures that you have chosen, they bring your words to life.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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thank you bill 😊💙🖊️🦄
Comment from jmdg1954
Watching a sunrise over the oceans waters is amazing and gives promise to a new day. On the flip side, the sun setting below the water line ends our fulfilling day.
This poem met the criteria of rules. Very much said and left to ponder in only two lines.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Watching a sunrise over the oceans waters is amazing and gives promise to a new day. On the flip side, the sun setting below the water line ends our fulfilling day.
This poem met the criteria of rules. Very much said and left to ponder in only two lines.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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thank you jmdg 😎💙🖋️🦄
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a lot of rules for such a small thing. Problem: you have three lines. You have time to correct it.
Nice thought. Everything else is fine. Good luck.
Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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What a lot of rules for such a small thing. Problem: you have three lines. You have time to correct it.
Nice thought. Everything else is fine. Good luck.
Karen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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what is on the third line for you? i ask because on my screen it's fin with 2 lines... thank you karen 🤔😊👍💙🖊️🦄
Comment from mermaids
This is such a challenging form to create but you did well here. Love sunrises and sunsets. You did well with the internal and ending rhymes which bring forth feelings and emotions about life. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This is such a challenging form to create but you did well here. Love sunrises and sunsets. You did well with the internal and ending rhymes which bring forth feelings and emotions about life. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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thank you mermaid 😁👍💓🖋️🦄
Comment from June Sargent
A short but profound piece. We are all challenged from birth Til death with all that life throws at us. However, we can learn to navigate through each storm with a working compass implanted at birth. A strong moral conscience.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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A short but profound piece. We are all challenged from birth Til death with all that life throws at us. However, we can learn to navigate through each storm with a working compass implanted at birth. A strong moral conscience.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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yup. thank you june 🤔😁💓🖋️🦄
Comment from Boogienights
What a lovely poem and picture! It doesn't take a lot of words to covey a feeling, you have done an excellent job giving the reader a sense of peace. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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What a lovely poem and picture! It doesn't take a lot of words to covey a feeling, you have done an excellent job giving the reader a sense of peace. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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thank you boogie! 😁😊💓🖊️🦄
Comment from BenThrone
I think this could be a strong entry in the essence contest. I understand the requirements of the form in terms of syllable count and rhyme structure, but still feel like I don't really understand what the form is meant to do (in other words, is it meant to be like a haiku in capturing a specific emotion by linking it to an image?). So I can't say whether this meets what the CEC will be looking for, but I like it!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I think this could be a strong entry in the essence contest. I understand the requirements of the form in terms of syllable count and rhyme structure, but still feel like I don't really understand what the form is meant to do (in other words, is it meant to be like a haiku in capturing a specific emotion by linking it to an image?). So I can't say whether this meets what the CEC will be looking for, but I like it!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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lol sure hope so! thank you ben 😅😊👍💙🖋️🦄