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Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful senryu, Gypsy. The lyrebird sounds like a baby crying -sounds so real. She is missing her mother. The pictures were great. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 06-Jan-2024
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I had to google the lyrebird. Such an interesting bird. Thank you for educating me with this wonderful poem and presentation. You never cease to amaze me with your talent.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your excellent five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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aw sweet yet sad... excellent senryu with good imagery and smooth flow and great satori.
cool pics and colours too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I've never heard of the lyrabird. But I know sometimes cats can cry and sound like children. This was a sad poem that pulls at the heartstrings. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    I wanted a bird and it took a while to find one. I never heard of it either. It mimics sounds.

    Thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
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This is such beautiful imagery. I've been blessed to see the lyrebird - they are stunning birds. Did you know they are amazing mimics and can imitate many other sounds as well as a baby's cry? Lovely writing. :)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Yes, I knew they mimic sounds but I never have seen one. Do you live in Australia? I read they are Australian birds.

    Thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Navada on 06-Jan-2024
    I do live in Australia. We have such fascinating natural fauna here :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    I have another friend who lives in Australia and loves animals, insects, and birds. (Jumbo )
Comment from lyenochka
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I love the lyrebird and would love to see one in real life. I wonder if any Stateside zoo has a lyrebird. I only know they are in Australia. The lyrebird mimics every sound so perhaps he can also bring up the sounds of missing and sadness, too.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
    I searched bird sounds for a while and lyrebird can mimic crying. I would like to see it and hear his song. Too bad they live in Australia. I'll have to ask James, he probably has seen them.

    Thank you, big sister (*=*) have a wonderful weekend!

    love,
    marival