Comment from Ridge Nash

Excellent

Nice poem! I really like the photo for it! I also like the words you chose and also how descriptive it is. It gives a clear vision of what you're going for!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024

Thank you for reading and taking time to review. I appreciate your positive words. Elaine

Comment from Daylily

Excellent

What a lovely posting for fellow FS members, their friends, and those young and old in their families. This chapter offers astonishing imagery, and that picture you selected to accent the message is completely gorgeous.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024

Love your words. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Wy Jung

Excellent

This is a great community. Not sure who specifically this is for, but it warms my mermaid heart to read it. The picture is well suited for the words and the font goes along well and is easy to read. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

Your words are so kind. I am glad you enjoyed my mermaid poem for Judiverse. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. It is so creative. Love the picture of the mermaid. It all goes together very good. I like the colors too. Great job

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

Thank you so much. Elaine

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

A Very Loving Free Verse with a Very Beautiful photo, wondering if the photo inspired the verses or the other way around- at any case Loved reading and rating this.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

I appreciate your thoughtful words and taking time to read my poet. I searched for a picture to fit my poem. Thank you. Elaine

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is beautiful and magical... somewhat dreamy, too. A creative piece that speaks of great imagination through its well-crafted lines. Lovely work here.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thank you for your encouraging words and thoughtful review. Elaine

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Mermaids are unique and sometimes there's a loneliness in being unique if your like-minded friends aren't nearby. This is a well written poem full of emotion, colorful descriptions, and imagery, The image and presentation support the words well. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024

Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine

Comment from Allieas

Excellent

Such beautiful imagery you've woven into this poem. It evokes a sense of magic, and especially the magic of turning words into art. I also really liked your color scheme and the photo you chose. Thanks for sharing, and happy writing, Mermaids!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024

Thank you for reading and enjoying my work. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Elaine

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I found this poem to be moving. I think we can all relate to thinking of those who are absent. Your words were lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024

Thank you so much. Elaine

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Well done, in your 'water world' complete with dolphins, a flip of the mermaid's fish tail, and seahorses. A nice edition to the Prayer book for FanStory friends.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024

Thank you. Elaine