The Wave
The roaring wave gives way to peace in God's presence.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your descriptions here and your end rhymes, it is a pity there is no metre in this poem to give it the rhythm within, however I enjoyed the sentiment, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your descriptions here and your end rhymes, it is a pity there is no metre in this poem to give it the rhythm within, however I enjoyed the sentiment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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So sorry for the delayed response. I appreciate your review!
Best wishes in your writing
Comment from JanPerry
Waves frighten me a lot. I like your flow and there's an ab rhyme. Second last stanza has no rhyme. Try to be consistent throughout.
Best wishes, Jan.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Waves frighten me a lot. I like your flow and there's an ab rhyme. Second last stanza has no rhyme. Try to be consistent throughout.
Best wishes, Jan.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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So sorry for the delayed response. I appreciate your review!
Best wishes in your writing
