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Comment from Pantygynt
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I don't think religion and science can ever be compared using similar arguments since religion is based on faith and science on proof, both of which can exist independently and neither one should be used to refute or back up the other.. But full marks for trying in this excellently written verse,

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
    Thank you once more. I see your point.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Beautiful poem and I love how you engraved our existence in these lines:"o creation may have been in picoseconds,

As where trillions represent our human days,

While enactment stretched out over many eons.

All His time seen in an Alpha and Omega gaze." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much Iza Deleanu for reading and reviewing my work. You picked out some on my favorite lines in this one. Good choice. I appreciate the stars as well.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This poem has some interesting thoughts. It reminds me a bit of an LDS Institute class where the teacher pointed out that God could use what looks like evolution if He wanted to in a more orderly way than we realize. I can't remember the term he used. I think the term 'primordial stew' reminds me that you have to let bread dough rise a while before you can cook it and eat it. It doesn't mean it's rising because of chance or by accident or in some chaotic way; it's just going through a process. Here is a line with interesting 'n' alliteration: Smiling as new nuances are imagined

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much Christie, for reading and reviewing my work. I am pleased that you found my n alliteration line. I made me smile. I enjoyed your classroom description as well.
Comment from mermaids
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I like your theme of time and I believe creation and evolution are the same.
I also like the mention of 16 billion prayers, easily that many prayers every day. Excellent use of words that takes the reader to another place and also gives the reader something to think about.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you mermaids for reading my work and for for this positive review
Comment from royowen
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There's nothing that you've written on this page I can possibly disagree with, it's only when one disarms their mind and finite understanding can one possibly have even the vaguest notion of our infinite God, there is nothing He's not aware of, and with the length, breadth and width of wisdom and understanding, I'm so grateful for just a small piece of that, God can't fill a vessel that's already full, one has to empty oneself as best one can, it's the James 1:5 can begin to operate well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Roy. Amen.
reply by royowen on 03-Jan-2024
    Bless you
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautifully written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It is amazing to me that God knew at the foundations of the universe that Patricia Lawrence would one day grace the earth. He knew my maiden name he knew my married name, he knew all about me even at the foundations other universe. Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you Patricia. Yes He did. Isn't it wonderful?