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Without Words

3/5/3 Poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from JanPerry
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Hi there. The "a" drifted off to the end of the line.
Yes...a sensual touch of mother and baby which reassures them both that they are connected physically at birth. Good ideas.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you for your kind review Jan, and for your time - Bless
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

this is a nice piece, although I think you've misspelt te last wrd. it should b reassures rather than reasures.

Nice pairing of title, picture and poem. Nice job
GMG

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review GMG - your comment is very much appreciated! - Bless You