The Kiss
A desire from a long time ago.6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
My husband just passed, and this is a wish I would love to have one more time. I'm sure you have touched many hearts with this wish; probably even your own.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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My husband just passed, and this is a wish I would love to have one more time. I'm sure you have touched many hearts with this wish; probably even your own.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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I'm sorry to hear about your husband, Rosemary. Yet, his kisses will always be with you. Just close your eyes and feel his love.
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thank you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love this one. I especially love your Author's Note. What cool artwork to go with it, too! The classic Life magazine photo, updated SO beautifully! Good luck to you in the contest with this. I bet it does well. xo
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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I love this one. I especially love your Author's Note. What cool artwork to go with it, too! The classic Life magazine photo, updated SO beautifully! Good luck to you in the contest with this. I bet it does well. xo
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Oh-la-la, mystery poet! This is so romantic and nostalgic in short verse love poetry. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Oh-la-la, mystery poet! This is so romantic and nostalgic in short verse love poetry. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Sally. :) My best to you in everything you do.
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Thank you, my friend. Blessings,
Sal :))
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This s a nicely expressed piece in the confines of the 3-5-3 format. It can be open to many scenarios which is also good for a piece.
All syllables present and correct
Best of luck
GMG
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Hi there,
This s a nicely expressed piece in the confines of the 3-5-3 format. It can be open to many scenarios which is also good for a piece.
All syllables present and correct
Best of luck
GMG
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you, GMG. :) I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Navada
This was obviously a meaningful and ecstatic experience that has stayed with you. I have been fortunate to have shared a similar experience and it was life-changing. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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This was obviously a meaningful and ecstatic experience that has stayed with you. I have been fortunate to have shared a similar experience and it was life-changing. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Navada. A kiss is a wonderful memory when it stays with you. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the scene as
well as the emotion.
-A good concluding line showing how
meaningful this encounter was.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the scene as
well as the emotion.
-A good concluding line showing how
meaningful this encounter was.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Pam. :)
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You are welcome.