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5 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked the picture out to me. Very clever. The poem flowed well. Very descriptive. Great job . The words mystical, teller and a dream gave the picture an extra touch. Great job
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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I liked the picture out to me. Very clever. The poem flowed well. Very descriptive. Great job . The words mystical, teller and a dream gave the picture an extra touch. Great job
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you ...
Comment from Janis M.
Is this about your wife I presume? Is she a nurse literally or metaphorically or both? I am just curious. This is a very sweet dedication you have written. The short written lines is appropriate I think as each line focuses on each aspect of this person and is given its own weight and meaning.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Is this about your wife I presume? Is she a nurse literally or metaphorically or both? I am just curious. This is a very sweet dedication you have written. The short written lines is appropriate I think as each line focuses on each aspect of this person and is given its own weight and meaning.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is my little ode ... it took a few moments to glance at her and she was a beautiful as she always has been it is a culmination of about thirty odd years knowing her some said she would drive me mad and bless my insanity but she over the years has proved to be quite the comforter and just between you and me she is not my wife she is the moon ... my midnight maiden she knows all my secrets ... night night !
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Nice!!! Very similar to a poem I just revived then. You will probably enjoy it.
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I'll try and keep up with the reviewing I'm on a break for a while but I'll be around
Comment from Douglas Goff
She sounds like quite a wonderful picture of feminine beauty.
I wonder if different women meet this criteria for different men. Soul mates of sorts. Interesting read.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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She sounds like quite a wonderful picture of feminine beauty.
I wonder if different women meet this criteria for different men. Soul mates of sorts. Interesting read.
D
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This kind of woman is only found in mine though I dare say many a soul mate has their comparison also their delight she comes at midnight it when she shines brightest ... !
Comment from Sabrina H.
Beautifully written poem about someone dear and precious. I love the picture too, it compliments the writing. No grammar error, or any that I read. It's perfect.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Beautifully written poem about someone dear and precious. I love the picture too, it compliments the writing. No grammar error, or any that I read. It's perfect.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent then the five stars it is lol .
Comment from Daylily
This is a lovely poem describing someone very precious to the writer. It is a special thing to connect to another person who can bring out the best in us and then be able to show how much we admire and appreciate them for doing it.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is a lovely poem describing someone very precious to the writer. It is a special thing to connect to another person who can bring out the best in us and then be able to show how much we admire and appreciate them for doing it.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This woman is always there and she has promised to keep me till my dying day ...
