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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Now, wait a blooming minute. We just started winter, and not we're ending summer??? Of course, if we're living by our friends in Australia this poem would be perfect, well closer because summer would be just beginning. However, I completely enjoyed the poem and the presentation.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    It's not literally written, per say. With haiku you can write about any season regardless of what season it is.

    Thank you very much, my friend. Happy New Year --prosperous, healthy, and loving 2024.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, although we lose the warmth of summer we can keep the warm memories to help us through the colder seasons of autumn and winter. Another nice seasonal poem.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, Big Sister. Happy New Year --may it be prosperous, full of health and love. Blessings.

    Love you,

    MariVal
reply by lyenochka on 31-Dec-2023
    Love you, too! Happy New Year!! 💖🎵🎉
Comment from GWHARGIS
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There is something so sad about those last blossoms of summer. Yet they are a special gift. I love the imagery of the flowers cradled and the meaning behind summers warm embrace. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The pictures are perfect for this scene. Time to gather the last flowers mixed with memories. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. Happy New Year --may it be prosperous, full of health and love. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 31-Dec-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy. You as well have a Happy New Years and full of health and love.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Your Haiku is a warm memory of our summer past. Your last line is super phrasing.

I enjoyed the overall presentation for your Haiku club entry.

Mark

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. Happy New Year --may it be prosperous, full of health and love.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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aw sweet flowery almost fall haiku
nice imagery tangled with smooth flowing memories...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a beautiful haiku. Your poem and photo make me long for summer again as I sit here in freezing weather! The connection between flowers and memories brings in a nostalgic effect. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. Happy New Year --may it be prosperous, full of health and love.

    Gypsy hugs