Week Three 2023 - 2024
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5 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
This is a strong biographical telling of a the journey taken by a writer. I enjoyed reading it. This is the standout line that is my favorite:
tests of time training a poetic mind
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
This is a strong biographical telling of a the journey taken by a writer. I enjoyed reading it. This is the standout line that is my favorite:
tests of time training a poetic mind
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Thank you much appreciated
Comment from T.A. Walk
Thank you for sharing this is wonderful!
I have no SPAG critique to offer you today.
Nice image paired with the piece, and I love the bold text.
Sometimes I feel as though my pen is homing in and writing down what my heart needs to say as well.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
Thank you for sharing this is wonderful!
I have no SPAG critique to offer you today.
Nice image paired with the piece, and I love the bold text.
Sometimes I feel as though my pen is homing in and writing down what my heart needs to say as well.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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... that's the way it should be my friend
Comment from Reece Gibson
For a reason I'm not sure of, this is reminiscent of Poe. This is clever. Detailing the life of a troubled writer in poetry form. I enjoyed this my friend.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
For a reason I'm not sure of, this is reminiscent of Poe. This is clever. Detailing the life of a troubled writer in poetry form. I enjoyed this my friend.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Thank you ...
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a quite interesting way to introduce/describe yourself. Inventive and unique. Much like your musings. Very enjoyable. Thank you for the peel at your persona!
D
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
This is a quite interesting way to introduce/describe yourself. Inventive and unique. Much like your musings. Very enjoyable. Thank you for the peel at your persona!
D
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thanks D much appreciated as always ... thank you !
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you ... much appreciate !