New York Woman
About me!2 total reviews
Comment from Janis M.
Since the contest is blind, I would consider getting rid of your name for the title! It does seem silly for us to write a bio and have it be blind. However, might as well do our best to not "reveal" ourselves
Thank you for sharing a bit about you!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Since the contest is blind, I would consider getting rid of your name for the title! It does seem silly for us to write a bio and have it be blind. However, might as well do our best to not "reveal" ourselves
Thank you for sharing a bit about you!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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I just realized that now! I will edit accordingly. Thank you.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a very nice poem with lovely word choices and great text selection against a pink background makes your words stand out. A couple suggestions if I may I suggest having someone read or yourself read out loud your poem look for a cadence a rhythm a regular beat. If the floor feels right to you then you have a winner if you stumble along then maybe that you have one or two words too many or one or two words not enough. This can sometimes be the difference between a good poem and a fantastic one. This however does not take away from the beauty of your poem I encourage you to keep writing as I very much enjoyed this. I hope this helps you I hope you had a great Christmas and your new year is grand as well all the best!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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This is a very nice poem with lovely word choices and great text selection against a pink background makes your words stand out. A couple suggestions if I may I suggest having someone read or yourself read out loud your poem look for a cadence a rhythm a regular beat. If the floor feels right to you then you have a winner if you stumble along then maybe that you have one or two words too many or one or two words not enough. This can sometimes be the difference between a good poem and a fantastic one. This however does not take away from the beauty of your poem I encourage you to keep writing as I very much enjoyed this. I hope this helps you I hope you had a great Christmas and your new year is grand as well all the best!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your kind words! I will consider rhythm moving forward.