Comment from
Navada
I think you've met the brief really well here and I think the artwork really helps to add an extra dollop of humour as well! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
Comment from
Julie Helms
I think you nailed the prompt! This was quite humorous even though it should be sad because somebody died. I liked the second line "pushed me away said I couldn't tagalong". It made me think of a younger sibling, who normally was well tolerated by the elder. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023