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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi MariVal,
such a clever use of word play to convey the wonder of new love.

And I know I'm not your usual male stereotype... 'cause I love flowers, I love the colour and fragrance... and I love all the little creatures and insects that love them also. Even in my younger years when hospitalised with sporting injury and such, I would request flowers rather than anything else.

As always, your presentation is impeccable, along with the composition.

Beautiful!

With our thoughts we create...
our connection to nature.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Your review reminded me of a children's book about a unique bull who loved flowers more than fighting... it's a sweet story and your review made me smile... "the story of Ferdinand ".

    I love your uniqueness ... it makes you such extraordinary man. I'm happy to be your friend.

    Thank you 😊

    Con cariņo

    MariVal
    "Different is good. Think of yourself as a diamond among pebbles." Anonymous
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Quite a sensuous poem for your presentation today. Do like the combo of words and artwork for your Haiku.

I would change up your colors and use red for your roses and yellow for your jasmine text line.

Mark

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, Mark. Have a wonderful weekend and new year.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The pictures were fantastic. They said so much love in those simple words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend. blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 29-Dec-2023
    You too have a wonderful weekend and you are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this lovely photograph and the poetic words with us. I could feel the romance. The idea of jasmine down to roses was a perfect vivid image.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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ooh very cool! excellent satori!
the different flowers in her hair and at her feet work well with the imagery in this - perfect pic, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
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I especially like this haiku and think your theme was endearing. I like the romantic slant of your words and I'm in love with jasmine, so there is always that! :). Great job, as always, Gypsy.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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They don't look like jasmine flowers but maybe there's a variety like that. Besides, she's so pretty and alluring, we can completely focus on her and that can make "love blossom"!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    I looked for what I wanted for a long time and the golden jasmine is all that fit the poem better. The picture is named jasmine and I think the shape is right ... or close. Anyway, we can use our imagination LoL

    Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful weekend.

    love,

    marival
reply by lyenochka on 29-Dec-2023
    I had a crown of yellow roses in my hair for my wedding. 😊💞
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Are you a hippie at heart with flowers in your hair? LoL. I had a crown of flowers at my wedding too
reply by lyenochka on 31-Dec-2023
    YES! But a somewhat conservative hippie 😊💞🌷
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a nice poem about the love of this beautiful woman. Her love is blossoming as expressed by these two flowers. I like the double meaning of the word "blossom".

Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Teri7 on 29-Dec-2023
    You are so welcome my friend! love and blessings, Teri