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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and nice picture....has a dreamlike quality....well, most of my dreams involve nudity and three to five women, but this is nice too

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. The picture was superb and matched your words. The moonlight river soothed the wishing star. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 29-Dec-2023
    Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is a tender poem filled with hope and romance. It seems like all is right with the world. The sentiment is beautiful as is the poem and the presentation. It's one of those poems that makes me feel it doesn't get any better.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i like the image of a shimmering river of moonlight
a good senryu to wish upon under the twinkling stars

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That really looks like a "river of moonlight." I think this would be a sweet love poem for someone. It shows the delight that the narrator has for the addressee.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you, big sister. I'm happy the emotion came through for you.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from Claire Tennant
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This is my first introduction to SENRYU. The artwork creates peace. The words convey beauty and sincerity. Thank you for the opportunity to read and learn.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Daylily
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This presents stunning artwork with a beautiful message, Gypsy. The mood is tender and romantic. I like the quote you give by Novalis very much, also. It is a strong and true statement. Thank you for sharing!
X X Lily

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Julie Helms
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Breathtaking and beautiful! I am new to this form of poetry, so thank you for the explanation. That last line is like a clincher. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs