John & Shorty Learn to Waltz
Humorous western script19 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a fun story with some really corny jokes from Shorty. The ladies don't seem to be really angry at them for picking the wrong beauty queen, and everyone seems to enjoy learning to dance.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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This is a fun story with some really corny jokes from Shorty. The ladies don't seem to be really angry at them for picking the wrong beauty queen, and everyone seems to enjoy learning to dance.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your super review.
Comment from nomi338
This is a very well written script. I had no problem visualizing the action as it was described. I do have to say though the jokes were really groaners, but you are forgiven as I enjoyed the story pretty much.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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This is a very well written script. I had no problem visualizing the action as it was described. I do have to say though the jokes were really groaners, but you are forgiven as I enjoyed the story pretty much.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from Sandollar
This is my first time reading and reviewing a script. I enjoyed the story, even with the corny jokes. I always thought it was hard to write scripts and screenplays; you make it seem easy to do. The story about learning the waltz is a good one for young adults.
I found no errors.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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This is my first time reading and reviewing a script. I enjoyed the story, even with the corny jokes. I always thought it was hard to write scripts and screenplays; you make it seem easy to do. The story about learning the waltz is a good one for young adults.
I found no errors.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your super review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a fun script! This was an absolute delight to read with plenty of humorous puns ( like the feet running in the family, the stirrup on the pancakes, the 'waltz' of the barn) You were on fire here! Excellent! I look forward to reading more. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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What a fun script! This was an absolute delight to read with plenty of humorous puns ( like the feet running in the family, the stirrup on the pancakes, the 'waltz' of the barn) You were on fire here! Excellent! I look forward to reading more. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and write an enthusiastic review.
Comment from damommy
I love it, the puns were delightful and very well done. Feeding his horse pancakes with "stirrup" on them. Great humor, and I enjoyed it. Keep 'em coming'.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
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I love it, the puns were delightful and very well done. Feeding his horse pancakes with "stirrup" on them. Great humor, and I enjoyed it. Keep 'em coming'.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your super review. December events have slowed me down a bit, but 2024 may prove more inspirational on these.
Comment from w.j.debi
I am delighted to see John Shane and Shorty make another appearance. They always make me laugh and this is no exception. You have a knack for puns and your characters liven up the stage-if only in my mind. I hope you find someone to perform these scripts some day. They would be fun to watch.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
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I am delighted to see John Shane and Shorty make another appearance. They always make me laugh and this is no exception. You have a knack for puns and your characters liven up the stage-if only in my mind. I hope you find someone to perform these scripts some day. They would be fun to watch.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your great review. I research puns all the time and then try to make them original for the situation. I really hope I can find someone who likes corny western humor, too, for performance purposes.
Comment from Daylily
This is very funny and entertaining. I enjoyed all the puns and quips scattered throughout. It was the horse picture you are using that drew me in. Excellent choice!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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This is very funny and entertaining. I enjoyed all the puns and quips scattered throughout. It was the horse picture you are using that drew me in. Excellent choice!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. Happy New Year, coming up.
Comment from Sanku
It was a fun read .The puns and the jokes made it lively.Miss Flora May explained the steps in a very clear way .Eating pancakes with stirrup was really hilarious..
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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It was a fun read .The puns and the jokes made it lively.Miss Flora May explained the steps in a very clear way .Eating pancakes with stirrup was really hilarious..
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your super review. I tried frying a cookie like a pancake last night, but it didn't work out.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of allusion will draw the reader in. The setting shapesm the characters and the characters create the entertainment. This is an aside but reading this description made me think of how embarrassed the nuns were when we asked if they had feet: "(Modestly holds skirt up about six inches to show foot in new shoe.)" I enjoyed your play on words. Good work
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Your use of allusion will draw the reader in. The setting shapesm the characters and the characters create the entertainment. This is an aside but reading this description made me think of how embarrassed the nuns were when we asked if they had feet: "(Modestly holds skirt up about six inches to show foot in new shoe.)" I enjoyed your play on words. Good work
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your personal and detailed review. Everyone in smaller towns in Idaho, Utah, etc. in the 19th Century seemed more modest overall. That is a funny question, to ask nuns if they had feet. Thanks again for reviewing!
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LoL ...we never saw them in the classroom
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a cute ending. I think the waltz is an easy dance to demonstrate. Like any other dancing, you must be graceful on your feet. Like your script.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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What a cute ending. I think the waltz is an easy dance to demonstrate. Like any other dancing, you must be graceful on your feet. Like your script.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your super review! Have a Happy New Year.