Free as Free
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Comment from JSD
These Loop poems only really work if the repetition is not too obtrusive. Yours certainly is natural and unforced and the message is light-hearted and fun. Well done and good luck with this.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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These Loop poems only really work if the repetition is not too obtrusive. Yours certainly is natural and unforced and the message is light-hearted and fun. Well done and good luck with this.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank JSD
Saw I got a mention in the final listing
Thanks and have a good Christmas break and happy new year
Comment from Navada
I like your central theme here and you've done well to deal with the challenges of the loop form - it gave me a fair bit of trouble to get right! Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I like your central theme here and you've done well to deal with the challenges of the loop form - it gave me a fair bit of trouble to get right! Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank You Navada
Had a little trouble myself. Did not understand Th ACBC approach and had to look it up.
Blessings to you and Happy Christmas and new year. Will attempt to see your entry. my problem is still trying to work out how Fan Story is all put together. I have previously forwarded thankyou comments and only recently realized they never went. Still forwarding a few that did not make it.
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All good - it takes a little while but it's worth it in the end! Let me know if you have any questions I can help with.
