By Magic
A short Christmas Story5 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was just lovely. A great story. But we didn't get to see a picture of the hunk or the sweet lid. You can get free pictures from Bing, google, and interest. Just mention them in the author notes. Good writing.
Karen
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This was just lovely. A great story. But we didn't get to see a picture of the hunk or the sweet lid. You can get free pictures from Bing, google, and interest. Just mention them in the author notes. Good writing.
Karen
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
Comment from Gunner Lil
A well written Christmas story. An easy read with great pace and flow. This reader wanted more from when Santa was gone from his work- station.
Timmy was a smart kid.
Will Kay and Adam work out??
Great job. Thank you.
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A well written Christmas story. An easy read with great pace and flow. This reader wanted more from when Santa was gone from his work- station.
Timmy was a smart kid.
Will Kay and Adam work out??
Great job. Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
Comment from Mintybee
This was full of heart and Christmas magic. The romantic aspect was a bit rushed for me, but it read like a Christmas special. Who doesn't love a miracle at Christmas? I do like the trope of strangers showing up to save Christmas.
Mintybee
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This was full of heart and Christmas magic. The romantic aspect was a bit rushed for me, but it read like a Christmas special. Who doesn't love a miracle at Christmas? I do like the trope of strangers showing up to save Christmas.
Mintybee
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
Comment from Sandollar
This story was a delight to read. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. You only had those three characters, and they carried the whole story. I know a few nay-sayers about the magic of Christmas that this story could help. My favorite part was Timmy's Santa list. I found no errors. Good luck in the contest.
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This story was a delight to read. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. You only had those three characters, and they carried the whole story. I know a few nay-sayers about the magic of Christmas that this story could help. My favorite part was Timmy's Santa list. I found no errors. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
Comment from patcelaw
There is a very strong feeling of magic to your story. I enjoyed so much listening to it, and I could put myself in the place of K as she struggled with raising her son, and I can also put my self in the place of Adam and his longing for a mate. You see I had that kind of magic with my late husband when I met him I was sure that he wasn't going to like me because I had had some problems before I met him that could've turned him away but instead of turning him away, it only drew him closer to me, and we were married for 37 years. This, without a doubt had to be a six star writing. Patricia.
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There is a very strong feeling of magic to your story. I enjoyed so much listening to it, and I could put myself in the place of K as she struggled with raising her son, and I can also put my self in the place of Adam and his longing for a mate. You see I had that kind of magic with my late husband when I met him I was sure that he wasn't going to like me because I had had some problems before I met him that could've turned him away but instead of turning him away, it only drew him closer to me, and we were married for 37 years. This, without a doubt had to be a six star writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
