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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm sure many workers, who worked over Christmas feel unappreciated, and they had to be away from their families and loved ones. Thank you for sharing this presentation with us.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. Yes, one of my first jobs was at a department store. I was left alone at the register on Christmas eve, it was a mad house and I almost cried.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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What a fun, informative and cool Semryu. I love what ants stand for.... Unless they are in my house, and then they stand for nothing except, OUT!! But it is true that we can learn from the ant, their values as far as workmanship and how they all do their part to prepare for a rainy day. I must try one of these again. Hmmm, is this one that is in the club entries right now? I will look and see what is available.
I really liked this one a lot. Thanks so much! Debi

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. It's not in the clubs, I just thought about it. Merry Christmas (*<>*)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. I guess every species must have their royalty and working class citizens. The poor working class ants are one of the most hardworking in the animal kingdom!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
    LoL. Yes, poor little working ants. Thank you, big sister. Goodnight.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from aryr
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. The picture definitely says it all. It shows that the ants are low classed and unappreciated. They are truly unappreciated. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 26-Dec-2023
    Hope you had a great Christmas, most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
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lol a great senryu!
and it even has rhyme in it!
cool pic and imagistic word choices
smooth flow through

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I fixed it :)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi MariVal,
I guess it just another totalitarian rule?

Everyone in their station performing their duty to allow the ongoing production, status, safety of Queen and colony.

What a truly amazing image... looks as though they built a beautiful castle for their Queen.

Wonderfully composed Senryu... oh how it relates to what we are seeing across the globe with the haves and have nots.

With our thoughts we create...
the equality of our service.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
    Thank you, James, it was a silly one, trying to to light up the mood. (*÷*)

    Con cariņo

    Marival
Comment from Austin Yu
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This is such a sad, but true reality. Many employees today work day and night, and risk their entire livelihoods on such incremental pay, just like ants. The world is truly greedy sometimes.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs