2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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17 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What an amazing and eye-catching presentation and very clever use of the Gogohka freestyle form of Japanese poetry.
I am in awe of your talent and feel privileged to read your poetry.
Thank you for sharing with such finesse and flair.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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What an amazing and eye-catching presentation and very clever use of the Gogohka freestyle form of Japanese poetry.
I am in awe of your talent and feel privileged to read your poetry.
Thank you for sharing with such finesse and flair.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptiona six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
Comment from June Sargent
Feelings caught on the fringe of faith, never actually moving forward. Just waiting. So sad. This is a touching and poignant piece that tugs at the heart. Beautiful presentation. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Feelings caught on the fringe of faith, never actually moving forward. Just waiting. So sad. This is a touching and poignant piece that tugs at the heart. Beautiful presentation. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Heather Knight
Hola Marival,
Me alegra mucho volverte a leer después de tanto tiempo.
This poem is as beautiful as everything you write.
And I wish your quote was true, maybe it is to a certain extent.
Sorry, I'm not feeling very happy at the moment, but it will pass.
Feliz Navidad.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Hola Marival,
Me alegra mucho volverte a leer después de tanto tiempo.
This poem is as beautiful as everything you write.
And I wish your quote was true, maybe it is to a certain extent.
Sorry, I'm not feeling very happy at the moment, but it will pass.
Feliz Navidad.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Que paso? Let me know if I can help, I'm a good listener and I know everything about depression or just sadness in general. Many people feel blue during the holidays.
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.
Feliz aņo nuevo!
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Thanks, Marival. I became a grandma for the first time on 21st. My daughter-in-law is being lovely as usual, but I don't know what's got into my son. He doesn't want us near the baby. I want to think it's because the delivery was quite traumatic and ... well, it seems today he was more relaxed.
Anyway, Annie is perfect and things will get better, I'm sure. I'll keep you posted.
Muchos besos.
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Felicidades, abuelita (*<>*)
My daughter and her husband were very protective and sensitive. She got mad at me all the time, but only in those first few weeks. Now I take care of my grandson full time. I love him. Abracitos
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The first days were the worst (2 days really).
They're still very protective of Annie, but now we see her often and my son doesn't get nervous when I hold her any more.
Nice to read you again.
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The first days were the worst (2 days really).
They're still very protective of Annie, but now we see her often and my son doesn't get nervous when I hold her any more.
Nice to read you again.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Again, your images and words are wonderfully written. I truly believe in your teachings through your poetry. You express your poems so gorgeous and I love to read them.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Again, your images and words are wonderfully written. I truly believe in your teachings through your poetry. You express your poems so gorgeous and I love to read them.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Well, that guy is a jerk and there's no way this young lady should wait for have anything to do with him. She's much better than that. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
he said, "it's not you" bs (I don't understand the 'bs')
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Well, that guy is a jerk and there's no way this young lady should wait for have anything to do with him. She's much better than that. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
he said, "it's not you" bs (I don't understand the 'bs')
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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bs = bull shit I didn't want to spell it out and be crude
Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas day.
gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad. I really liked the description of "on the fringe of faith
n a sea of love" as the love seems boundless at the time but the faith is tenuous because the narrator knows that one side of the couple could betray at anytime. She knows that from experience.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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That's so sad. I really liked the description of "on the fringe of faith
n a sea of love" as the love seems boundless at the time but the faith is tenuous because the narrator knows that one side of the couple could betray at anytime. She knows that from experience.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you, big sister. How was your Christmas day? I had a good one. Atticus has a lot of toys that he will get tired of after a few days. I got him art supplies, I know he will use them
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How fun! I know you'll teach Atticus all about how to enjoy expressing himself with art!
Our Christmas Eve was super busy and so comparatively, Christmas was quiet.
Comment from Sugarray77
Thank you Gypsy for a well-written read on this Christmas Day. I enjoyed your talented writing and the tale of lost love. Thank you and have a wonderful Christmas evening!
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Gypsy for a well-written read on this Christmas Day. I enjoyed your talented writing and the tale of lost love. Thank you and have a wonderful Christmas evening!
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful gogyohka, Gypsy. The pictures were beautiful. Your words were very touching, he didn't love you. He was over you! Very well done and sadly but greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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This was a wonderful gogyohka, Gypsy. The pictures were beautiful. Your words were very touching, he didn't love you. He was over you! Very well done and sadly but greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
It's not you. That has such a double edge. It's not you that is the problem. It's not you that I love. Sad words to hear. Especially if you can't imagine a life without that person. Sad but common . Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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It's not you. That has such a double edge. It's not you that is the problem. It's not you that I love. Sad words to hear. Especially if you can't imagine a life without that person. Sad but common . Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Merry Christmas (*<>*)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Great writing, and wonderful pictures. Paul is home and better, Jesse is healing ahead of schedule, Sandra Is still in hospital. Please add to the new book for Kathy, Bill Schott's wife. Happy Holidays. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Great writing, and wonderful pictures. Paul is home and better, Jesse is healing ahead of schedule, Sandra Is still in hospital. Please add to the new book for Kathy, Bill Schott's wife. Happy Holidays. Karen
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Yes, I will 🙏 pray
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs