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Comment from
Navada
Interesting. Did he genuinely drop it and this was her way of ingratiating herself with him, or did she already have it and use it as a means of making contact?
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
As far as I know, he genuinely dropped it. But do we ever know the whole picture? Thank you for engaging with the story.
Comment from
Julie Helms
Interesting turnabout in the story. It feels like a much bigger story lies behind it. I am intrigued.
You have spelled Elizabeth 2 different ways, I would recommend changing one of them so they match.
Merry Christmas to you!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
Good observation. You are right, Thank you. I did spell Elizabeth in two different ways.
We do not get to know the whole story. We cannot know the future until it comes. We can still be present as matters evolve.
Good holiday to you.
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