A Peek At A Creek
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Stahhhhp! This was just wrong, wrong, wrong, Mystery Flasher. Yes, I smirked...but that doesn't mean you shouldn't be ashamed of yourself. tsk, tsk, tsk. Good luck at the polls. xo
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Stahhhhp! This was just wrong, wrong, wrong, Mystery Flasher. Yes, I smirked...but that doesn't mean you shouldn't be ashamed of yourself. tsk, tsk, tsk. Good luck at the polls. xo
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
I love it! This is a very imaginative and clever response with a great funny punch line at the end! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
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I love it! This is a very imaginative and clever response with a great funny punch line at the end! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
Comment from Julie Helms
Ha ha, very humorous, Aesop fable-style story! But isn't that just human nature... Give an inch and take a mile. I really like how it felt I was moving into a story of love, But then it quickly turned to greed. Very well done!
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Ha ha, very humorous, Aesop fable-style story! But isn't that just human nature... Give an inch and take a mile. I really like how it felt I was moving into a story of love, But then it quickly turned to greed. Very well done!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely, a bit racist but we'll overlook that:) I really wanted that story to go on a bit longer. Skilfully contained in that 50 word format with a nice, fitting image. I'm going to be careful next time I go near a creek, that's for sure:)) Good luck! It's a strong contender, I think! Debbie
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Lovely, a bit racist but we'll overlook that:) I really wanted that story to go on a bit longer. Skilfully contained in that 50 word format with a nice, fitting image. I'm going to be careful next time I go near a creek, that's for sure:)) Good luck! It's a strong contender, I think! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023