Comment from Julie Helms

Good

Every girls dream... Prince charming, a kiss, and a happy ending... (Sigh)

2 parts seemed a little awkward in the wording:
She slept *all her entire life*
A prince came to *break it out of her*

Thank you for the fairytale. Merry Christmas to you!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I like that you've re-developed a familiar story in contemporary language and featuring a modern-day woman with a contemporary name! Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thank you so much!