Beyond our grasp
Tercet 3 line poem.15 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have never written this style of poetry so to try to commit on someone else's would perhaps be a little awkward. I would like to try writing this style but I think I'll have to learn first. It looks good to me.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I have never written this style of poetry so to try to commit on someone else's would perhaps be a little awkward. I would like to try writing this style but I think I'll have to learn first. It looks good to me.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.More and more new forms are emerging.It is a learning process.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Lovely writing, but I would recommend that you use disappearing instead of evanescent. It is not a common word that all people will know. Bill Schotts wife is in the hospital add them to the prayer list.
Season's greetings. Sound ironic. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Lovely writing, but I would recommend that you use disappearing instead of evanescent. It is not a common word that all people will know. Bill Schotts wife is in the hospital add them to the prayer list.
Season's greetings. Sound ironic. Karen :-)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much. Hope she is back home by now
Comment from w.j.debi
This is an excellent response to the prompt. You give us words to ponder as we consider the progress of time and the meaning of life with all its variety forms.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent response to the prompt. You give us words to ponder as we consider the progress of time and the meaning of life with all its variety forms.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is a very cool style of poem . You have a good rhythm going and it's almost like a child's poem being very playful. I enjoyed this. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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This is a very cool style of poem . You have a good rhythm going and it's almost like a child's poem being very playful. I enjoyed this. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tercet, Beyond Our Grasp, has the proper formatting and sends us into the grips of insanity as we try to get somewhere in an ever-changing environment.
Found this: pendulum
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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This tercet, Beyond Our Grasp, has the proper formatting and sends us into the grips of insanity as we try to get somewhere in an ever-changing environment.
Found this: pendulum
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much .I hope your wife is back home and well My prayers .
Comment from Wendy G
Time, that master of our lives, causes swings of emotion and experiences as it moves relentlessly forward. Always elusive and beyond our control. Excellent Tercet. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Time, that master of our lives, causes swings of emotion and experiences as it moves relentlessly forward. Always elusive and beyond our control. Excellent Tercet. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you Wendy>
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this description of the in graspable nature of time as an "evanescent dream." Great use of alliteration, too. Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Loved this description of the in graspable nature of time as an "evanescent dream." Great use of alliteration, too. Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much Helen .Hope you had a lovely New Year..
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💞💖🙏🎉🎵 Blessings on your year, too, Santha!
Comment from Navada
I really like your language choices here and there is a rolling rhythm that perfectly suits your chosen theme. One little edit required - "pendulum". Lovely choice of metaphor with time being described as "inexorable roll of wheel" - that's really spot on! :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I really like your language choices here and there is a rolling rhythm that perfectly suits your chosen theme. One little edit required - "pendulum". Lovely choice of metaphor with time being described as "inexorable roll of wheel" - that's really spot on! :)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much forstopping by.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our emotions sometimes swing from joy to sorrow and we never know what we will face in life and it can be a rollercoaster ride, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Our emotions sometimes swing from joy to sorrow and we never know what we will face in life and it can be a rollercoaster ride, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much ..
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a very nice job presenting this quatrain in a meaningful and well-written manner. I would mention that the prompt asks us to state in the notes the style of meter and rhyme scheme. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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You did a very nice job presenting this quatrain in a meaningful and well-written manner. I would mention that the prompt asks us to state in the notes the style of meter and rhyme scheme. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.for stopping by.
