The Snow Shall Fall
Believe in the season2 total reviews
Comment from Navada
I enjoyed your metre and rhyming scheme here and especially the imagery you used to connect the snowfall with memories and the theme of innocent trust. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed your metre and rhyming scheme here and especially the imagery you used to connect the snowfall with memories and the theme of innocent trust. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thanks for your review. Have a nice holiday!
Comment from Austin Yu
This is such a strong entry to the Christmas Poetry contest. The imagery you used to describe the cold weather of Christmas night, and the warmth that comes from the Christmas spirit is simply amazing. I especially liked "Specks of peace and joy are floating in the air," as it immediately shouts "SNOWFLAKES!" but you never explicitly stated that they were snowflakes, which shows that you have perfected imagery. Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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This is such a strong entry to the Christmas Poetry contest. The imagery you used to describe the cold weather of Christmas night, and the warmth that comes from the Christmas spirit is simply amazing. I especially liked "Specks of peace and joy are floating in the air," as it immediately shouts "SNOWFLAKES!" but you never explicitly stated that they were snowflakes, which shows that you have perfected imagery. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thanks for the detailed review. Glad you liked it. You have a great holiday too!
