Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

You have done a beautiful job with your Rondelet duet. The important message of home and faith to bring comfort to Sandra.

A fine presentation and I also join in wishing for Sandra to recover and come back home soon.

Thank you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Gloria. I appreciate your comments about the form and message of hope and faith, along with the presentation. I know Sandra will appreciate your kind words. Have a Merry Christmas.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Beautiful poem. Beautiful poetic form. Beautiful illustration. And a beautiful reason for writing this! Faith can, has, and will move mountains, whether a mountain of sorrow, or illness or whatever the need may be.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review, Jim. I appreciate your comments about the form, poem, and illustration. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about faith and what it can do. Have a Merry Christmas.

reply by jim vecchio on 24-Dec-2023

May many Blessings come your way!

reply by jim vecchio on 25-Dec-2023

Hope you had the best Christmas ever!

Comment from w.j.debi

Exceptional

Excellent Rondelet form. The compassion you express and the advice you share are touching. I'm sure Sandra welcomes your words and will find comfort in them. I hope she gets well soon. She is an important writer on the site.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Debi. I appreciate your comments about the form, compassion and advice. I think Sandra will find comfort from all of our words and sharing thoughts about them and what they mean. She is a big part of our writing community.

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

It is wonderful to read of your sentiments and caring of Sandra. I don't know her but send my well wishes also. Your Rondelets are perfect. Thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem and caring thoughts for Sandra. She will appreciate your good wishes. I am glad you liked the form and poem.

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Pam,
A beautiful pair of Rondelets for Sandra wrapped in love and prayer.
Perfect meter and rhyme in a lovely presentation, and
a warm snowy picture for the holiday season.
On Faith Rely will bring much comfort.
Best wishes to all.
Robert

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I appreciate your comments about the poem "wrapped in love and prayer," along with the meter, rhyme, and picture for the holiday season, as well as bring a feeling of comfort, too.

Comment from Sarita Méndez

Excellent

These are two beautiful poems, I love their rhythm and rhymes.
And I too send wishes to your friend Sandra. May all of you have a beautiful and joyful Christmas' day.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review, Sarita. I appreciate your comments about the poems, rhythm, and rhymes. Sandra will appreciate your good wishes. I had a very nice Christmas and hope you did too.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem touched my heart. Somethings we can't control. My favorite prayer is the Serenity Prayer. "Give me the serenity to accept the things I can't control, the strength to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." That simple prayer brings me comfort, perhaps it can comfort you.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem, and you are right about not being able to control certain things. The Serenity Prayer is a special one. Thanks for sharing about it.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A lovely rondelet poem for Sandra. True words and very encouraging, offering care and hope to Sandra. She will be delighted to read your carefully constructed and thoughtful meaningful words.
Wendy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review, Wendy. I appreciate your comments about the poem and encouraging words. I think she will appreciate everything everyone is doing to send her positive messages.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Oh my. I had no idea she was sick. I hope and pray she recovers quickly from this. This was a lively and heartfelt poem. Thank you for letting us know. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review, Gretchen. This happened recently, and I know Sandra will appreciate your kind thoughts and prayers. I am glad you liked the poem.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Nicely done, Pam. I'm sure that Sandra will enjoy all the poems that have been written for her. I have never been very successful with the exotic forms.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review, Paul. I appreciate your comments about the poem and Sandra will appreciate everything everyone is doing. It is hard to write poems for something like this. I happened to like Helen's so I gave it a try.