Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Trailer Trash"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Don't think they're find her I think she's all carved up like fricacy! Amazing writing skills I must say! Just a little side note. The system has a bit of a glitch and it's put in some funky symbols into your writing to have to go in and delete them. It's just a system quirk. This does not take away from the absolute genius and hard work. You put into this chapter and has it needs a well deserved six I hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Don't think they're find her I think she's all carved up like fricacy! Amazing writing skills I must say! Just a little side note. The system has a bit of a glitch and it's put in some funky symbols into your writing to have to go in and delete them. It's just a system quirk. This does not take away from the absolute genius and hard work. You put into this chapter and has it needs a well deserved six I hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written story, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your riding. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year God bless and have a good evening. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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This is a very well written story, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your riding. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year God bless and have a good evening. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you Pat - enjoy the holidays! I always look forward to your imput!
Comment from Austin Yu
This story led me on a roller coaster of worry, and distress, which is what you're looking for in a mystery story like this. Frankly, I'm not a huge fan of this type of writing, but I liked all the clues you laid out in this story, in the search for the 3 missing children, one of which is 14, which felt like a scavenger hunt to me. The interrogations also seem very natural, and I'm assuming you have watched documentaries on subjects similar to these. Nice work!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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This story led me on a roller coaster of worry, and distress, which is what you're looking for in a mystery story like this. Frankly, I'm not a huge fan of this type of writing, but I liked all the clues you laid out in this story, in the search for the 3 missing children, one of which is 14, which felt like a scavenger hunt to me. The interrogations also seem very natural, and I'm assuming you have watched documentaries on subjects similar to these. Nice work!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you Austin. I appreciate your feedback.... also 3 women and one teen boy.
Eileen