Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Donna, this is a very beautiful, spiritual poem you have penned about Advent path. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023

Hi Teri, thanks for your comments and review. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Donna

reply by Teri7 on 21-Dec-2023

you are so welcome sweet friend! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you also!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice adventure, and I enjoyed listening to it. It's very difficult for me to read. However, if you would make your font larger as if you would make it background a bit lighter with a darker font something would help people like me who have vision problems. Patricia.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Hi Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. I hope my editing helped. Dove Merry Christmas!

reply by patcelaw on 20-Dec-2023

Yes, your aunt didn?t help the great deal. People with vision problems usually need a good contrast between the light in the dark.

Comment from Austin Yu

Excellent

Nice poetry on the birth of Jesus Christ, and the true reason for why we should celebrate Advent and Christmas. Each day of Advent counts down to the arrival of Jesus Christ. Nice writing, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Dear Austin Yu, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Merry Christmas!

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello and Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading your verse about Advent and how God's blessings are on us through the birth of Jesus and evident during the Christmas season. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Hi Melissa, thanks for your comments and review. Merry Christmas! Dove