2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "A Myriad Stars".
10 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Marival,
how perfectly entrancingly captivating!
You have spiked every sense to the highest degree with such vivid imagery... nothing is spared.
This stunning poem held me from start to finish with in its poetic entrancing beauty.
Someone is going to have to come up with some out of the ordinary to knock this slice of heaven off the top of the perch in my opinion... all the very best wishes in this contest MariVal... I love it!
Stunning presentation, composition and construction!
With our thoughts we create...
a connect to coherent feelings.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Hi Marival,
how perfectly entrancingly captivating!
You have spiked every sense to the highest degree with such vivid imagery... nothing is spared.
This stunning poem held me from start to finish with in its poetic entrancing beauty.
Someone is going to have to come up with some out of the ordinary to knock this slice of heaven off the top of the perch in my opinion... all the very best wishes in this contest MariVal... I love it!
Stunning presentation, composition and construction!
With our thoughts we create...
a connect to coherent feelings.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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James, thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I know you're busy.
Thank you for the bright six stars!!!!
Con cariņo
Marival
"We are not defined by the challenges in our lives but how we face them"
Con cariņo
Marival
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It was and still is my pleasure sweet lady... what a truly stunning poem!
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Thank you, James. It means a lot coming from you. Have a lovely day.
Con cariņo
Marival
Comment from lyenochka
I imagine that you are an expert in lucid dreams. These yearnings are described full of the scents and tastes and sensations that the narrator yearns for, remembering the beloved.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I imagine that you are an expert in lucid dreams. These yearnings are described full of the scents and tastes and sensations that the narrator yearns for, remembering the beloved.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. Good night.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. You did an excellent job in crafting this lovely and flowing FreeVerse poem. Your clever use of words intertwined with the artwork is exceptional and I wish I knew how to do it :). A lovely entry and very competitive. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Hello Gypsy. You did an excellent job in crafting this lovely and flowing FreeVerse poem. Your clever use of words intertwined with the artwork is exceptional and I wish I knew how to do it :). A lovely entry and very competitive. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a wonderful free verse poem which freed up the free verse poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. The pictures were free. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a wonderful free verse poem which freed up the free verse poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. The pictures were free. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have to give this poem a six, although it deserves a perfect 10. I enjoyed reading all the poems. The vivid imagery was perfect as was the presentation. I really liked the wolf, not sure why, but it seemed to add mystery to the poem.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I have to give this poem a six, although it deserves a perfect 10. I enjoyed reading all the poems. The vivid imagery was perfect as was the presentation. I really liked the wolf, not sure why, but it seemed to add mystery to the poem.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Good night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
autumn, spring, summer. . . what about winter?!?? LOL
great free verse with cool yet hot imagery
i liked the your body calls me and my body calls you lines
smooth flow of words...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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autumn, spring, summer. . . what about winter?!?? LOL
great free verse with cool yet hot imagery
i liked the your body calls me and my body calls you lines
smooth flow of words...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy---and like a distant memory teasing from the edge of my mind, this reminds me of long ago days and nights, although I can't say why exactly!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy---and like a distant memory teasing from the edge of my mind, this reminds me of long ago days and nights, although I can't say why exactly!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
These are very cool poems. I like how you write about the way you feel then you write about how he feels. The comparisons to the animals is awesome. This was very good. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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These are very cool poems. I like how you write about the way you feel then you write about how he feels. The comparisons to the animals is awesome. This was very good. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Wendyanne
The imagery you have used in this very well written piece of free verse poetry is beautiful!! "our kindred spirits
fly high on Venus's wings
amidst a myriad stars
dancing to the universe's beat"
Very nice! Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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The imagery you have used in this very well written piece of free verse poetry is beautiful!! "our kindred spirits
fly high on Venus's wings
amidst a myriad stars
dancing to the universe's beat"
Very nice! Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem (*=*) Have a beautiful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
The imagery here is as powerful and sensual as always. Your writing is so elemental in its use of nature and it draws one in, allowing us as readers to reflect on our own stories and feel how they relate to yours. I really enjoy this about your writing. Thank you for the share!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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The imagery here is as powerful and sensual as always. Your writing is so elemental in its use of nature and it draws one in, allowing us as readers to reflect on our own stories and feel how they relate to yours. I really enjoy this about your writing. Thank you for the share!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem (*=*) Have a beautiful night.
Gypsy hugs