Consuming Thoughts
One liner about emotions3 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
Problems in one's nest, take a stick, administrate those long over due blows. Bring harmony back into your home ð??¡. At least, that's what I perceived about this particular thought. Could be totally wrong
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Problems in one's nest, take a stick, administrate those long over due blows. Bring harmony back into your home ð??¡. At least, that's what I perceived about this particular thought. Could be totally wrong
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
Comment from patcelaw
This is very interesting right that you have done. I don't see the reason why you need to have the same line repeated may you have a very blessed day and a good weekend ahead. Also, above all, may you have a very merry Christmas and a most happy and prosperous new year. Pat
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This is very interesting right that you have done. I don't see the reason why you need to have the same line repeated may you have a very blessed day and a good weekend ahead. Also, above all, may you have a very merry Christmas and a most happy and prosperous new year. Pat
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
I like the aliiteration of "flickering flames" and the exploration of your narrator's "house of straw" - there is a fragility and guilt between the lines here that is brought home clearly with the reference to "conscience". Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
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I like the aliiteration of "flickering flames" and the exploration of your narrator's "house of straw" - there is a fragility and guilt between the lines here that is brought home clearly with the reference to "conscience". Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
