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Poetry Beyond the Ordinary

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I could be wrong, but this is poem, right? But it appears to be posted on the prose side of the house. Is that intentional? I've noticed it before. I sure hope this isn't foreseeing the future. I couldn't see any way to improve this.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Thanks again Barbara.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Goodness I hope this is not foreshadowing of a possible future.

We have enough problems on the green marble without the earth collapsing.

Scary read, Doc!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Thanks Douglas for reading my message about Time.
    Doctor Ricky