Week One 2023 - 2024
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A Ghost of Christmas"... Freeverse ...
6 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
A wonderful piece reminding people to be grateful for the things they have in life because they cost a price. We should be more grateful and kind because of it.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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A wonderful piece reminding people to be grateful for the things they have in life because they cost a price. We should be more grateful and kind because of it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Excellent ... much appreciated !
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Ghost of Christmas, sends the readers back to the child's first welcoming to the bleak and violent nation that will be the beginning of the new world.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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This poem, The Ghost of Christmas, sends the readers back to the child's first welcoming to the bleak and violent nation that will be the beginning of the new world.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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... well all things are determined so we can only sit and watch unless we are involved in it ... God is divine and it's his world ... we are but servants like Joan of Arc !
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nativity scene for Christmas and a reminder of what Christmas is all about as we are tempted by the retailers to spend, spend, spend. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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A fine nativity scene for Christmas and a reminder of what Christmas is all about as we are tempted by the retailers to spend, spend, spend. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Excellent ... much appreciated !
Comment from Austin Yu
I love your poem, especially since it's the holiday season right now! As the wise men travel for miles, with the stars guiding them, the savior of our world was born in a grass manger. I love your message that Jesus is the reason for the season. Happy holidays!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I love your poem, especially since it's the holiday season right now! As the wise men travel for miles, with the stars guiding them, the savior of our world was born in a grass manger. I love your message that Jesus is the reason for the season. Happy holidays!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you my friend much appreciated
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No problem.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, Mr. Pen (ha!) that lays it out pretty good. I liked the string start and the very strong ending.
This is the real reason for the season! Very well done.
Merry Christmas!
D
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Well, Mr. Pen (ha!) that lays it out pretty good. I liked the string start and the very strong ending.
This is the real reason for the season! Very well done.
Merry Christmas!
D
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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All the best for the season my friend BP !
Comment from Navada
I liked your presentation of the story and the final stanza explains the reason for everything else that precedes it. This is the true meaning of Christmas - the fact that, low-born and high-born alike, Jesus came for us.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I liked your presentation of the story and the final stanza explains the reason for everything else that precedes it. This is the true meaning of Christmas - the fact that, low-born and high-born alike, Jesus came for us.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I believe so ... with anyone it is a fifty-fifty situation and with our beloved Jew of scripture we love them as Christians because of their election !
