2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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6 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful Tanka, Gypsy. The pictures included both of them-first-hand in hand among the barley, then the sun follows. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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What a wonderful Tanka, Gypsy. The pictures included both of them-first-hand in hand among the barley, then the sun follows. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
one person takes one step forward
one person takes two steps back--
(paula abdul - opposites attract)
love that song!
great tanka with cool imagery and smooth of sea meeting land... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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one person takes one step forward
one person takes two steps back--
(paula abdul - opposites attract)
love that song!
great tanka with cool imagery and smooth of sea meeting land... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your review. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a fun poem that has many repetitions. I really like the triple rhymes in the fourth line. But I think the last word "Barley" seems to be out of place in this poem.
Just my two cents.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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This is a fun poem that has many repetitions. I really like the triple rhymes in the fourth line. But I think the last word "Barley" seems to be out of place in this poem.
Just my two cents.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
Well said! I like how you use the waves and the rocky shore to symbolize two very different types of personalities which are attracted to each other but the relationship can never be.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Well said! I like how you use the waves and the rocky shore to symbolize two very different types of personalities which are attracted to each other but the relationship can never be.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. (*÷*)
Love,
Marival
Lov
Comment from patcelaw
The message of this taco poem is very pleasant to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year and I hope you have had a good weekend as well. Patricia.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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The message of this taco poem is very pleasant to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year and I hope you have had a good weekend as well. Patricia.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Janis M.
I like the juxtaposition of the two different land forms, between the sea and gold fields. Their images contrast both in nature and color. It makes a lot of sense for human nature too, to yearn for something we are not.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I like the juxtaposition of the two different land forms, between the sea and gold fields. Their images contrast both in nature and color. It makes a lot of sense for human nature too, to yearn for something we are not.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs