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The End of Saying It

a fifteen-syllable poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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If we are lucky to have a tomorrow as some are not this lucky, if we have the chance to wake and try again we had better do a good job! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Dolly
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Wendyanne
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Wake and again try - to die?? I hope this isn't what you are trying to say!!! Every morning we hope that we will wake up and try to live our lives not die!! I hope you are ok?

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Basically, if you wake up, shape up.