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A bow to the scowl2 total reviews
Comment from Bicpen
syllable count good reason for the four because without the picture it has no descriptive reference to what we know by your poem and picture ... in free verse we can do the same using the picture as its metaphor or title as its metaphor ... difficult with 15 syllables.
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syllable count good reason for the four because without the picture it has no descriptive reference to what we know by your poem and picture ... in free verse we can do the same using the picture as its metaphor or title as its metaphor ... difficult with 15 syllables.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
For such a good-looking man, he certainly can produce an effective scowl. Is it his training as an actor, or a lifetime of dissatisfaction with things or the world in general? We may never know ...
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For such a good-looking man, he certainly can produce an effective scowl. Is it his training as an actor, or a lifetime of dissatisfaction with things or the world in general? We may never know ...
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
