Ghost to the Rescue
A ghost can be helpful if one does believe.3 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good writing for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful week and a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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This is a very good writing for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful week and a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Navada
This is a really interesting concept for a story. I liked the idea of a ghost being able to communicate with a human and with such a noble purpose in mind. I'm interested that the ghosts could physically interact with the bad guy - this required some suspension of disbelief, but it's a satisfying ending nonetheless.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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This is a really interesting concept for a story. I liked the idea of a ghost being able to communicate with a human and with such a noble purpose in mind. I'm interested that the ghosts could physically interact with the bad guy - this required some suspension of disbelief, but it's a satisfying ending nonetheless.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Recall the specter of Daniel interacted with the specter of the kidnapper. The violence then being transferred to the physical body. Still requires suspension of reality. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from royowen
I like the fact that in your story it dealt with justice, the hole in it was the fact that if the mother drowned their would be a body, how else would they know she drowned? You could say she simply vanished, that way it would tie that loose end, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I like the fact that in your story it dealt with justice, the hole in it was the fact that if the mother drowned their would be a body, how else would they know she drowned? You could say she simply vanished, that way it would tie that loose end, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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My thinking was that no body was found because she was swept out to sea. But I like the thought. I will rethink the situation. Thanks for the read and the suggestion.
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Good job
