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2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was a beautiful poem about a bird I knew nothing about. The blustery winds made me look out my window at the Nor'easter blowing around my island. It's no tundra but still pretty rough. Beautiful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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Oh those poor birds, Gypsy. The picture was of those poor birds. I loved your rhyme and the narrative notes, they made sense to me. This was a wonderful free verse. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 16-Dec-2023
    You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
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cute birdie poem
great imagery with the blustery, howling wind whistling...
smooth flow of words

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We have a lot of birds in Texas, but I have never seen a snow bunting and from your author's notes, I wouldn't unless one got lost. From the artwork you chose they are pretty birds. I enjoyed reading your poem and once, again, you've presented us with a beautiful and peaceful presentation.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Such cute birdies! I like how you compared the hardiness of the snow buntings standing up to the howling wind. Good use of alliteration in " wind whistles an eerie tune with the window panes."

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and very well written free verse poem you have penned about these rare birds. They are so tiny and cute it seems hard to imagine them being able to stand the cold. Very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose and great descriptive words. love, blessings and Merry Christmas. Teri

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs