2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Christmas at the Park".
18 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I love it when your name and work suddenly appears! This was another stunning display and your words illuminate the reader's heart as amply as He lights the hearts of the world.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I love it when your name and work suddenly appears! This was another stunning display and your words illuminate the reader's heart as amply as He lights the hearts of the world.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, Jim. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy hugs
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Reading one of your poems to me is better than going to a Godzilla movie! Only kidding! Love your words!
Comment from Wendyanne
This is such a sad but beautiful, very well written piece of poetry for the Christmas poem contest. I can picture that very sad sight and it brought a tear to my eyes. Absolutely beautiful. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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This is such a sad but beautiful, very well written piece of poetry for the Christmas poem contest. I can picture that very sad sight and it brought a tear to my eyes. Absolutely beautiful. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is an interesting poem that shows how a poor boy, like Jesus,
gets ready for Christmas by decorating a community tree.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Merry Christmas
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This is an interesting poem that shows how a poor boy, like Jesus,
gets ready for Christmas by decorating a community tree.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Merry Christmas
Joan
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Don't mention it, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is truly lovely and thought inspiring. It's also beautiful in presentation. I love "illuminated by the Light of the World. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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This is truly lovely and thought inspiring. It's also beautiful in presentation. I love "illuminated by the Light of the World. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting reflection for this Christmas season and where 'poor child' finds himself/herself on the pecking order of our socio/economic system
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Yes an interesting reflection for this Christmas season and where 'poor child' finds himself/herself on the pecking order of our socio/economic system
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Jesus is the light of the world. I know this is fiction, but I can't help but wonder how many children, in, not only the US, be across the world won't really have a Christmas. That makes me sad. I know the number is huge. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Jesus is the light of the world. I know this is fiction, but I can't help but wonder how many children, in, not only the US, be across the world won't really have a Christmas. That makes me sad. I know the number is huge. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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There are a lot of poor children....it's very sad.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ginda Simpson
With your words, you illuminate the world with the meaning of Christmas. What a beautiful scene you have created in which to portray this message. Really, really nice. Wishing you God's Light.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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With your words, you illuminate the world with the meaning of Christmas. What a beautiful scene you have created in which to portray this message. Really, really nice. Wishing you God's Light.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lisasview
As always Gypsy, lovely image with perfect colour choices and a thoughtful poem to go along with it....
I just love the idea of the north star on top of the tree...perfect..
Lisa
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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As always Gypsy, lovely image with perfect colour choices and a thoughtful poem to go along with it....
I just love the idea of the north star on top of the tree...perfect..
Lisa
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Always so easy to review work that I like....
Lisa
Comment from Navada
What a powerful and poignant image. Many people don't have a Christmas tree of their own, or a fancy feast on the table, or any of the trimmings that most of us associate with the day, but that doesn't mean they don't have a pure and innocent heart and a loving God who doesn't care what else they don't possess. Thanks so much for shaing this.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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What a powerful and poignant image. Many people don't have a Christmas tree of their own, or a fancy feast on the table, or any of the trimmings that most of us associate with the day, but that doesn't mean they don't have a pure and innocent heart and a loving God who doesn't care what else they don't possess. Thanks so much for shaing this.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very lovely and beautiful free verse Christmas poem you have penned. You used very lovely imagery and a great scripture from John 8:12. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, blessings and Merry Christmas! Teri
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Gypsy, this is a very lovely and beautiful free verse Christmas poem you have penned. You used very lovely imagery and a great scripture from John 8:12. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, blessings and Merry Christmas! Teri
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs