A Happy Ending
Part 2 Lapland20 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kay,
I like this love story of the love story of Santa and Mrs. Claus.
It is interesting you chose an Irish woman with the Irish melancholy
to be your Mrs. Claus. It shows the love of Christmas changing lives.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hi Kay,
I like this love story of the love story of Santa and Mrs. Claus.
It is interesting you chose an Irish woman with the Irish melancholy
to be your Mrs. Claus. It shows the love of Christmas changing lives.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hello Joan, I had to give Lapland a happy ending. People asked why she wasn't immortal. She is now!
Happy Christmas and a bright New Year. Love, Kay.
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Hi Kay,
It does seem that Santa is immortal so Mrs. Claus should be too.
Joan
Comment from Jacob1395
This was a really nice piece and I loved the happy ending that you created for them both. An excellent Christmas poem. I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This was a really nice piece and I loved the happy ending that you created for them both. An excellent Christmas poem. I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hello Jacob, Did you read part 1 Lapland? People asked why she wasn't immortal like Santa, she is now! Happy Christmas from Australia. Blessings, K.
Comment from jmdg1954
I didn't know what a loop poem was before I read yours. Since I do not write poetry, I can see the difficulties in creating a loop. I thought you did an admirable take on it and told the tale of Santa and Maeve very clearly.
Thank you for sharing.
John
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I didn't know what a loop poem was before I read yours. Since I do not write poetry, I can see the difficulties in creating a loop. I thought you did an admirable take on it and told the tale of Santa and Maeve very clearly.
Thank you for sharing.
John
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hello John, Did you read part 1 called Lapland? She wasn't immortal so I had to write Happy Ending. Glad you enjoyed it. Happy Christmas, Kay.
Comment from Lisasview
Hi there,
This did not show up on my messages... except that you mentioned it on your reply to my review...
Lovely continuation to your loop poetry...
Lisa, now in Spain...............
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hi there,
This did not show up on my messages... except that you mentioned it on your reply to my review...
Lovely continuation to your loop poetry...
Lisa, now in Spain...............
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Lisa, You will only get my messages if I PROMOTE it. That means I have to earn site money reviewing. It takes me forever to read poems for little return. I'm happy you enjoyed part 2 of Lapland. Happy Christmas from Australia! Kay xx
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Hi Kay,
I also go crazy reading and reviewing poems to earn "funny money"
I do review poems that only give 1 cent when they are on my messages... so I am not understanding what you are saying. I am happy to read your work even if you do not promote it... And, I loved LapLand
I have relatives in Australia that moved there from California...Now I have relatives all over the world...
Lisasview
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Poems not promoted only give 3c. I wrote to Tom and told him there is no such money in Oz. Where in Oz do your relatives live? I am on the east coast of Queensland. K xx
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Yes, I know but I still review them because I know many writers do not have enough "Funny money to promote" and I think it is important to review ...especially the ones on my Fan List.
I am not sure exactly where my second cousin lives... I also have relatives in New Zealand... We visited them in about 30 years ago...gosh time does fly...
Lisa
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A couple of my fans (I have 137) promote my work, and I so appreciate their generosity. They do it because they know I can't.
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Wow, 137 Fans... I am not sure how many I have but certainly not that many...
Lisa
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Have a look at your profile, it lists fans.
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Looks fantastic!!!
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, a charming ending for Maeve and Santa after an inauspcious beginning. Lol. Hope they weren't late doing their Christmas rounds. Forever love - that's a very good thing!
A fun Loop poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Yes, a charming ending for Maeve and Santa after an inauspcious beginning. Lol. Hope they weren't late doing their Christmas rounds. Forever love - that's a very good thing!
A fun Loop poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hello Wendy, I had to make her immortal so she could spend forever with Santa. Thanks for reading my friend. Very hot here, had a heatwave for two weeks and no rain. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Sanku
you have gifted santa with a mate. That is a lovely idea .so Maeve and Santa would travel across the world with their nags of Christmas gifts...Rudolph would no doubt enjoy this...
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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you have gifted santa with a mate. That is a lovely idea .so Maeve and Santa would travel across the world with their nags of Christmas gifts...Rudolph would no doubt enjoy this...
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Hello Sanku, Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed it. Christmas blessings, Kay.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a well written piece of loop poetry. I enjoyed the story of Santa and Maeve and their journey across the sky as a couple in love. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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This is a well written piece of loop poetry. I enjoyed the story of Santa and Maeve and their journey across the sky as a couple in love. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Hello, my friend, This is the happy ending to Lapland. I love writing about happy subjects. Christmas blessings, Kay.
Comment from lyenochka
Okay! Thank you for granting our wish for a happy ending both for Santa and his beloved Mrs. Claus. Now both can be forever young at heart and always the same age in body!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Okay! Thank you for granting our wish for a happy ending both for Santa and his beloved Mrs. Claus. Now both can be forever young at heart and always the same age in body!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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G'Day Lena, Thanks so much, my dear friend. Had to have a happy ending! Christmas blessings, K xx
Comment from Daylily
Ho Ho Ho -- You have written a lovely romantic ending for this Christmastime tale, Kay. Even if it is cold outside, the holidays are a good time to fall in love. (I just now wondered, is there a bad time?) Lol
I enjoyed reading your cheerful loop poem! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas holiday, my friend. X X Lily
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Ho Ho Ho -- You have written a lovely romantic ending for this Christmastime tale, Kay. Even if it is cold outside, the holidays are a good time to fall in love. (I just now wondered, is there a bad time?) Lol
I enjoyed reading your cheerful loop poem! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas holiday, my friend. X X Lily
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Lily, I can't remember when I fell in love! Glad you enjoyed the sequel to Lapland. Christmas blessings, Love, Kay.
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed your loop poem. I'm not a big fan of loop poems but you have done a good job with this one. I wish you the very biggest and best holiday season. May you have a blessed and prosperous new year as well. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed your loop poem. I'm not a big fan of loop poems but you have done a good job with this one. I wish you the very biggest and best holiday season. May you have a blessed and prosperous new year as well. Patricia.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Apart from going to church on Christmas Eve, there is only me and Benny dog for Christmas. I did celebrate with my niece last weekend. Thanks for reading and Christmas blessings to you. Love, Kay.
