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A Happy Ending

Part 2 Lapland

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Comment from l.raven
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Hi Kace, love is a many slender thing...
and Santa fell through the right roof...
now he has Maeve to cuddle with on those
snowy cold nights...

sweet girl...I've said it before...and I'll say it again...
you have the Loop poem form mastered...and this
is not and easy form to write...
a wonderful story told sweet girl...
and a perfect ending...

I love your poem my wonderful friend...and a stunning
picture of Santa...well done you...love to ya...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Here you are again! Catching up on reviews. It is much-appreciated sweetie apple pie. Love, Kace.
reply by l.raven on 22-Dec-2023
    we have finished all our Christmas shopping...so I stole a little time to
    myself sweetie pie...

    you my wonderful friend are one I
    try to catch up with...much love xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
    Thanks so much. No, it's not an easy poem to write but I love challenges. I hope you are safe at home. K xx
reply by l.raven on 24-Dec-2023
    well you do those challenges quit
    well sweetie pie...and your so very welcome...
    I am at my daughters for Christmas...
    and it's Christmas Eve...love much you...xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
    Happy Christmas Day my friend. At least you are in one place for a change! :-) XX Benny.
Comment from Sally Law
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No one does loop poetry like you, dear Kay. Beautifully written and illustrated for Christmas. I love the romance too. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for Christmas.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Hello Sally, Many thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it. Happy Christmas to you and your family. Love, Kay xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a very imaginative story in a loop poem about how Santa found Mrs. Santa. I'm glad you added a continuation to the original poem so your readers would have a happy, Merry Christmas ending. Ho, Ho, Ho!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Hello my friend, Many thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings for Christmas. Love, Kay xx :-)
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a cute loop poem. Santa is all about love so it makes sense he and his wife would be a very loving couple. It seem like she is getting to ride along in the sleigh with santa. I'll be she'll be a lot of help.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Hello Beth, Many thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Navada
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Well done! I've recently written a piece in this form and it can be tricky. I enjoyed your sweet tale of Maeve and Santa falling in love and proving it isn't purely the province of the young. :)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Hello Navada, Many thanks for reading. No, it isn't an easy form, I like the challenge. Happy Christmas. K xx
Comment from royowen
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The greatest gift anyone can be given is love, because love is eternal, when the Lord gives it He gives eternal, wipes out any wrongdoing, any debt once owed, pays it in blood money, and forever joy is ours, beautifully written loop poem, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Hello Roy, Glad you enjoyed part 2 of Lapland. I was having some fun with Santa. Happy Christmas to you and family. God bless, Kay xx
reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2023
    Well done
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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So that's the bright light in the sky, Maueve and Santa's gleaming eyes filled with love. LOL. A lovely happy ending for Santa and Maueve, K. Well done in your Loop poem. And, Merry Christmas to you,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Hello Valda, Thanks for reading part 2 of Lapland. I had to give it a happy ending. Happy Christmas friend. Kay xx
Comment from aryr
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I loved the picture of Santa Clause, Aussie/ Kay. Your words were the finishing touch. My goodness, Santa and Maeve were in love in a lapless sort of ways. After all they were in love. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Hello my dear friend. I had to give Lapland a happy ending. Blessings, Kay xx
reply by aryr on 15-Dec-2023
    You are very welcome, Kay.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a delightful read! It has such a lovely rhythm in this loop verse form and conveys a heart-warming story for the season. I've read the first part so this made for a perfect ending. Thanks so much Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Hello from Down under Debbie. So glad you enjoyed the happy ending. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Sarah Tummey
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I enjoyed reading this loop poem about Maeve. It was sort of a story as well as a poem, and a bit of fun too. Thank you for sharing and happy Christmas.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Hello Sarah, Thanks for reading, and glad you had fun. I had to write part 2 of Lapland (give it a happy ending) Happy Christmas friend. K xx