2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was the other one that I was struggling with about sixing. Brilliant colors and imagery.
Plus the thought of butterfly shadows seems absolutely magical. The gnome won out because it made me laugh. Just wanted you to know this piece was pretty brilliant as well.
Douglas
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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This was the other one that I was struggling with about sixing. Brilliant colors and imagery.
Plus the thought of butterfly shadows seems absolutely magical. The gnome won out because it made me laugh. Just wanted you to know this piece was pretty brilliant as well.
Douglas
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This was a beautiful and enchanting poem. You give your reader not only a beautiful presentation but the vision of butterflies flying over swaying tulips moving in the breeze.
Perfectly done.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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This was a beautiful and enchanting poem. You give your reader not only a beautiful presentation but the vision of butterflies flying over swaying tulips moving in the breeze.
Perfectly done.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
like the S alliteration with flies swiftly over sweet tulips
nice imagery there!
great satori about shadows, too
good one!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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like the S alliteration with flies swiftly over sweet tulips
nice imagery there!
great satori about shadows, too
good one!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a wonderful poem. The tulips were swaying softly in the breeze. Be it the wind or the breeze off of the butterfly wings. The motion kept us moving. Beautifully done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This was a wonderful poem. The tulips were swaying softly in the breeze. Be it the wind or the breeze off of the butterfly wings. The motion kept us moving. Beautifully done. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I stared at your poem for a few moments before I read. Not only is your poem beautifully written but the entire presentation is a thing of beauty. I can't express that enough. Thank you.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I stared at your poem for a few moments before I read. Not only is your poem beautifully written but the entire presentation is a thing of beauty. I can't express that enough. Thank you.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from karenina
This sings to me! "shadows try to keep up" is a great image in my mind...
Bless the glorious butterfly! She brings all things peaceful to the world!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This sings to me! "shadows try to keep up" is a great image in my mind...
Bless the glorious butterfly! She brings all things peaceful to the world!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, Karenina. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Marival
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You are such a class act!
Comment from lyenochka
I like that the "shadows try to keep up" because that brings such life not only to the shadows, great personification, but it also shows us how much fluttering the butterflies are doing!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I like that the "shadows try to keep up" because that brings such life not only to the shadows, great personification, but it also shows us how much fluttering the butterflies are doing!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Big sister,
Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Love,
Marival
Comment from patcelaw
You've done it again you have made a really beautiful presentation with the Japanese poetry. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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You've done it again you have made a really beautiful presentation with the Japanese poetry. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Patricia
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is another amazing and great haiku you have penned about these lovely butterflies gliding swiftly over the tulips. You used great descriptive words. You find the most awesome artwork my friend. A great post! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Gypsy, this is another amazing and great haiku you have penned about these lovely butterflies gliding swiftly over the tulips. You used great descriptive words. You find the most awesome artwork my friend. A great post! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Teri
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs