2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 83 "Muse Amidst Butterflies"-
6 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
butterflies... like rabid bats... batting their wings... within...
great gogyohka with wonderfully fluttering imagery
and a smooth flow of words. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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butterflies... like rabid bats... batting their wings... within...
great gogyohka with wonderfully fluttering imagery
and a smooth flow of words. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very beautiful image you have described. The butterflies fluttering as if guarding the muse. Then the muse in the water. Cleansing for the new year. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This was a very beautiful image you have described. The butterflies fluttering as if guarding the muse. Then the muse in the water. Cleansing for the new year. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing another beautiful presentation with us. I am wondering if you spend as much time on the presentation as you do the poem. You must have a designing degree or something.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing another beautiful presentation with us. I am wondering if you spend as much time on the presentation as you do the poem. You must have a designing degree or something.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
If I'd lived one second on this earth looking like that, I am sure my muse would be working overtime. (Giggling here in self-deprecation)--
Lovely words...
I don't know HOW you got my photo!
(Oh, silly me...)
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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If I'd lived one second on this earth looking like that, I am sure my muse would be working overtime. (Giggling here in self-deprecation)--
Lovely words...
I don't know HOW you got my photo!
(Oh, silly me...)
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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LoL.
Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Love,
Marival
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You rock!
:)
Comment from lyenochka
Butterflies in the stomach does show nervousness or excitement and the muse can cause both because there is so much we do want to share from all that winged and sparkling inspiration!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Butterflies in the stomach does show nervousness or excitement and the muse can cause both because there is so much we do want to share from all that winged and sparkling inspiration!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Big sister,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love,
Marival
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully worded and also it is presented in a very lovely manner. I appreciate so much you're fine work with the Japanese poetry forms. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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This is beautifully worded and also it is presented in a very lovely manner. I appreciate so much you're fine work with the Japanese poetry forms. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs