You'll Find Me There
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Comment from Sally Law
Just voted for this. I found this to be exceptionally well written, and very real. Thank you for not carrying on with platitudes. How refreshing.
Sending you my best today is always in the very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
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Just voted for this. I found this to be exceptionally well written, and very real. Thank you for not carrying on with platitudes. How refreshing.
Sending you my best today is always in the very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
Comment from Aiona
What an interesting poem structure. I see the rhyme scheme is aaab. It has a repeating line in each stanza as per the contest prompt. The topic is interesting too. It's kind of got a volta in the middle -- going from pessimism to optimism.
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What an interesting poem structure. I see the rhyme scheme is aaab. It has a repeating line in each stanza as per the contest prompt. The topic is interesting too. It's kind of got a volta in the middle -- going from pessimism to optimism.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
Comment from JSD
The line you have chosen to repeat has resonance throughout this, working in different ways for each stanza. Very effective and accomplished writing. Well done! And good luck in the competition.
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The line you have chosen to repeat has resonance throughout this, working in different ways for each stanza. Very effective and accomplished writing. Well done! And good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Wy Jung
I would almost like to hear this one put to music. I think it would do well lyrically. The picture fits the prompt response perfectly. Very well done.
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I would almost like to hear this one put to music. I think it would do well lyrically. The picture fits the prompt response perfectly. Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023